IM SO LOST IN BUSINESS ER (1 Viewer)

[Miuniumew]

I've already followed the requirements on how to write an extended response for business, but apparently it still doesn't reach at least a 17/20... is there anyone bothered to have a look at my response or is there a good sample I could follow?
IM SO TIRED OF THIS I WROTE BILLIONS OF RESPONSE AND I CHANGED EVERY PARTS BUT I STILL CAN'T REACH A LOW A UGHEHEHEAGUHE

 

[Shavi Masee]

 

[lunaaaa4403]

case studies and DPEEL. bam... BAND 6

 

[lunaaaa4403]

if you're already doing that, reread the textbook because your content probs makes no fucking sense. i believe in you random student!!!