i really enjoyed "alice is", the descriptions and all set up a somewhat genuine atmosphere.
"making wonderland" had me a little confused though.
i dont think my comment makes any sense but yeh. hahaha
haha i dont think any schools have stolen my teachers but err.. we have an ex-model who had one of them walk in roles on home and away?
oh oh! and our deputy principal gives out lollipops to you if its your birthday..?
well no one else has a point... and well yeh neither do i
everyone's so very talented its quite intimidating.
my story's too big to post attach.
if anyone is extremely bored and has nothing better to do.. which shouldnt be the case anyway.. then pm me and yeh..
oh well mine is terrible anyway so no one is missing out haha
i'm having enough trouble as it is trying to put my reflective statement together in the last minute, imagine if i had decided to throw it all away and start again
that would be about 10000 words including the journal, the story itself as well as the reflective statement all in 48 hours of...
does anybody hate their mw as much as i do?
if anyone is not busy, rather bored actually and wouldnt mind reading my crappy story and um.. give me some feedback ...id very much appreciate it
please pm me
hmm.. im kinda screwed. hahaha
just realised my mw is titled pieces of me as well... and it explores similar concepts to that of thingy maboby from last year..
is that bad?
i only just realised when i clicked on her reflective statement though
should i change my title?
well you...
ive done about 2000.. but its filled up with fragments that dont exactly link together.
My teacher wants 5000 by the end of the week or else ... and if not then i must consider dropping it..
HEY! i went through the exact same thing: no plotline, to teenage angst... and now i am also writing from the mind of a psycho
great.
so much for originality haha
ahh
ive written about 2000 words
but there all mumbo jumbo, thoughts and ideas mixed together
that doesnt make sense
Its mainly in first person
but doesnt seem to be having a plot whatsoever
YAY
ahahha
i think im going to fail