are you serious?
are there really no poblems with my story and you dont have any comments to make?
or is it that you are all secretly plotting to steal it and use it yourselves???
i hate you all T_T nobody has even looked here, what did i do wrong?
lols jk jk. whatever, im using it...
this is it, can you help me make it better, im not sure it even relates to imaginary journeys.
Thanks
The flight over had been boring, and jeez the plane and the airport cam out of the 20’s or at least the 70’s. Not even an air-conditioned walkway to the air-conditioned baggage claim...
soo emo is punk rock groupies? or is it a style of dressing?
the black shirt, faded tight jeans, badges and patches?
because this is not what my friends use emo as
hehe yeah. stupid english
my consolation is that post october 19th i will NEVER EVER critically analyse another great book and thereby ruin it (not that OGS is great)
i never said difficult, i have managed to make a sufficient essay on imaginative journeys from it.
but it still sucks i mean why the hell cwould they choose a physics set of biographies. Was the english-syllabus-chooser-person sleeping with a physics teacher or something?
first of all : what is bump?
second: this book is the worst freaking book for area of study any school could possibly study. i go to SCECGS Redlands and as a private school i would have assumed that they woul go all conformist and choose the same one as every other school but nooo they have...
what the heck is 'emo'?
my friends use and their explanations suck it of goes like this: ' it is like gothic but different' whatthe hell is that?
so a FFX story could be good but surely it wouldnt be imaginative because Final Fanatasy seems to rely on physical journeys to strangthen their...
yeah it isnt too bad but could i ask whether you often play a game like warcraft or some similar?
it has the the feel of a video game with mythical dreatures and you need ttry and explain this more (as smily cam said)
you DO need to try and make the point of the story come out more clearly...
im doing 'in the skin of a lion' too
it is a pretty good book the first time i read it, then we read it again in class and now i am reading it again just before the HSC starts.
1st = good and enjoyable
2nd (with notes) = annoying but still ok
3rd (extensive notes) = bleugh
and there...
i havent cried since i was about 8, now im 18
im not 'being cool' i just never get sad
im either frustrated, angry or homicidal when i get shitty marks
these trials i thought i would get allright marks in most of my classes but nooo my school decides to make every exam really hard and mark...