When they say they want more personal voice, if they are talking about a personal response, they mean more talking about you ie how it has influenced YOUR understanding - use more personal evaluation.
HOWEVER, the term personal voice can ALSO (esp in a non-personal response essay) mean that it...
Re: Creative Writing: Hints
I'll share one of the pieces of advise our teachers gave us.
A good creative writing story often doesn't have to tell an entire story - it gives us a short moment in time, perhaps a snippet of a much larger event.
For example, 2 of the best creative writing...
First thing is easy
Go to the Board of Studies website (the real one), go to HSC Syllybus, advanced English to find what each part involves. Go to HSC Exams, and look up past examination papers - they all have exactly the same layout, and structure, so if you've seen one you've seen them all...
In my English, I'm struggling with the Imaginary Journey extended response section. I can get band 6 answers easily for all the other parts with no problem. One time I even spent an hour reading a speech for the first time the night before for an essay on 2 speeches and still got a band 6...