its too simplistic, the language used does not really make the marker feel that they are experiencing this disaster and is very anticlimactic. Describing the some of the five senses that apply to your characters situation usually helps. ALSO "felt alienated; there was no one. I was alone" bits...
Hi ive got an assignment where i need to find sources for various dot points in the sylabus
I was wondering if anybody could help me find sources on the internet relating to HSC biology dot point
explain using specific examples, the importance of correct interpretation of signals by the...