Recent content by rozken123

im trying to say that friends/loved ones that we've lost exist or belong in our memories. also, the character has spiralled into obvious depression/borderline insanity because of the death of his friend, showing that he no longer belongs. I suppose that isn't made clear enough in the story...

It feels like a bit of a mess at the moment. Any thoughts on how I could make it more clear and compacted would be greatly appreciated. ♫ Should auld acquaintance be forgot, and never brought to mind? Should auld acquaintance be...

I agree completely that the sudden jump to the music discussion seems quite random/disconnected. I need to work out a way to make his thoughts flow better. The lack of characterisation is actually intentional as I'm trying to use this narrator as a sort of 'god-like' figure. His...

is your name eddy fu (at shore school) by any chance?

it still stands as one of the most revolutionary films of all time, as well as just being an amazing movie to watch. just talk about how significant it was to the science fiction genre and how it massively expanded the audience into popular culture. From a semi-niche genre/market to the film...

I do 4 unit english and for ext 2 have developed this character/narrator who is slightly derranged and expresses himself to other people entirely through song lyrics of great lyricists with the whole idea being "why would you bother to articulate your thoughts when someone has already done it...

thanks a lot guys, that really helped. 4/4 for this question in the assesment haha, so yeah thanks again!

I'm on my way to a completed first draft of my story which is based on the death of a close friend in primary school. I have chosen to frame the story with this narrator's pedantic thoughts and arguments with himself. I'm hoping that this narrator will be interesting enough to grab the...

ok, i understand exchange rates fine apart from one thing. why does fixing the exchange rate create either a BOP surplus if fixed below equillibrium or a BOP deficit if fixed above equillibrium? i know what the central bank has to do to achieve fixed rate and its difficulty to maintain through...