I don't think structure in legal studies essays is as important. You should still have your intro, and list what youre going to talk about, follow that order and then conclude..
Usually in e nglish essays i get 7-9/20 but for my legal studies essays I have gotten 16/20 and 17/20, so clearly...
The question is "Evaluate how the formal controls on state power protect individuals and society from the misuse and abuse of government authority"
The notes I have include:
Internal Review
External Review:
Office of the Ombudsman
ICAC
Privacy Bodies
AAT
Special Tribunals
Commissions...
In my notes I have internal review,
external review, which includes:
Office of Ombudsman
ICAC
Privacy Bodies
AAT
special tribunals
commissions of inquiry
and the courts.... as formal methods..