daniel592- hey, thanks for your honest opinion. i agree with you thoughts on lux's letter...i just couldnt be bothered to make it better during my final editing coz i was so over the whole thing haha
i used Carroll a lot because i thought the 'Alice' themes related well to the child/naive...
hey thanks! it was the final copy with those mistakes taken out lol...i thought i was finally finished and then gave it to my boyfriend to read, and then he found all these little spelling errors etc so i was like :0 and fixed them haha.
im glad you enjoyed it