Oh, so I wasn't the only imbecil who didn't sleep at all before the exams!
My friend sitting next to me was going on about how my eyes were all puffy, ahaha
I studied my ass off all night long :) Proud much?!
Section 1: 12/15
Section 2: 11/15
Section 3: 14/15
Roughly 82% is what I'm aiming for...
I'm pretty sure text 3 was about Australia and how a dude pictured it from his perspective... Which is why the last question was easier to talk about when comparing with text 1 or text 2. But I didn't...
Alright, the reason why I claimed that it was fair bit short is because you are vaguely touching the surface of the material you want to talk about...
I'll give you a metaphorical example.
Say you decide to go fishing. The most logical thing to do is make sure your bait (Attached to the...
Personally, I believe you have structured your essay well. Unlike most of the essays I've seen, it's coherent manner does appeal to me. It also appears to me that the level of your understand of your texts meets well beyond the criteria of being satisfactory.
However, I don't see any...
In terms of Section I, make sure you know your techniques. I cannot stress this enough. Whether it be language techniques or visual, get familiar with them. Try responding to a whole range of texts and pin point whatever you can. What I personally do, is grab a text and find all the techniques I...
19th - English Paper 1
22nd - English Paper 2
29th - Mathematics
30th - IPT
31st - PDHPE
9th - Drama
Can't believe how many people have similar timetables people have compared to me :o
Subjects:
Advanced English
Rank: 130/152
Mathematics
Rank: 88/119
IPT
Rank: 14/20
PDHPE
Rank: 37/49
Drama
Rank: 14/19
Yes, my ranks do indicate that I've done fairly bad at school and there are excuses which I won't even attempt to raise. All my marks were below the mean...
Alright, I'm not too sure which school you're from but from where I'm at, it's imperative that you need to get the basics right before anything else.
From what Iknow, writing your composers' name and the text names of ALL the texts you are discussing about is required in your introduction. I...
Don't hesitate to use simple texts such as a picture book (Which i'm doing) such as Where the Wild Things Are by Maurice Sendak.
Overload your essay with techniques and appropriately integrate it with The Tempest and the question and you should be good as gold :)!
Much as I would love to help you out, I cannot decipher much of the words as they appear to be too bright. Is there anyway you can somehow type it out or if not make the words darker? Read some of it, I think it has potential :]!