I'd give this an 11-12/15
I don't think your really understanding the concept of a journey, the journey is how it reflects on the composer and how context (there contemporary audience) is used in providing a vehicle to express their ideas.
You seem to be writing out a summary of each poem and...
my first kiss was when i was when i was in year 10, and she was the girl i liked for like a year and my chance came one night, i think it was one of the best nights i had, first kiss with a girl.... young, dumb and full of cum
you've got to love to love
The best way to get over your teen dream, is to find someone new and do the things u never got to do with the oen that left , the oen that u left without doign anythign about... so next time u think of doing the same thing open up, its better to get a million no's...
"how the text chosen reflects/adds to your understanding of the imaginative journey, mention whaqt teqniques are used by composer to convey the ideas about imaginative journey"