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what would 35/70 allign to from last year's scaling?

No particular question. Hoping to use on Thursday. Covering the floor was disturbing streaks of crimson, the wall painted a shiny hue. The room was encased in blood. The detective walked through the gruesome murder scene, taking particular care not to touch any of the evidence labelled...

Lol, well this thread is quite disheartening. What would raw marks of around 35 equate to? :S

The bartender has no commitment to the job. He's only there because he has no where else to go. But again, this is too subtle. He's also illiterate. But again, too subtle.

hmmm, well there is the character realisation of the bartender which is necessary for the story's conclusion, but it is incredibly subtle. I don't know how to build upon these ideas without making it derivative

Yeah, i was trying to emphasize his dislocation in the beginning and his ending, but thought that would be too cheesy. I'll re attack that section. Thanks

I figure it gives me room to expand for the question :P The two had been there all night. Just sitting there, the couple can’t have been comfortable on the cold iron bench they were sitting on. But neither of them moved all night, motionless in a tranquil moment of silent harmony. The inky...

never do this. It shows that you are unprepared and you will be marked poorly as a result

Would appreciate the skrzynecki notes :P

Just wondering if it would make a good related text. If now, any short stories or poems would be greatly appreciated

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It seems to be good about discovering personal identity and belonging to self.

okay, exams in two weeks, freaking the hell out. I seem incapable of formulating a response on past speeches questions.... Help?

Yes, i do understand the module; what i do not know is what I need to know about the texts in preparation

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