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i really enjoyed your story it was really different although at the start i found it a little difficult to see the journey aspect but that quickly changed a marker probably wouldn't have this problem i think that it could get a band six, how long did it take to write?
well done the whole thing was very good and very detailed, maybe a bit too much in some spots, but if you write like that in all your exams you'll do really well
sorry if i offended anyone, i was just saying that you might have more fun if you went where more people were going coz u'll probably be stuck in a carvan park with heaps of families, but the bay is beautiful i live 20 mins away from there and there's usually something going on even at mogo...
Bateman's Bay isnt worth going to for schoolies i go there heaps, there isnt anywhere good down there coz theres only RSL,golf and country clubs and a few dumpy pubs go where everyone else is im serious you'll probly regret going to schoolies there
you have obviously spent alot of time preparing your plans. Are you considering world revolution or just Australia? i would fully support an Australian Communist leader